Hunters chase a huge bear, send it right into the path of John and his Dad. I got a lot of feed back on this chapter, I did it in first person from John's point of view. I add a few sound effects with the bear and maybe over act a little. My feed back was about 50/50 for adults, either they were like "OMG that was AWESOME!" or they were like "That was a little too much for me.". Kids were about 100% loved it. But book publishers advised that I change to 3rd person and limit the drama and going forward I will start doing that.